View Full Version : Feedback on work in progress

09-18-2015, 09:30 AM
Just want some feedback on this song. Its my first one. Trying to make it sound like from a war movie...


09-18-2015, 12:25 PM
You have certainly managed to make this sound like a war movie soundtrack piece. It has a very intense ambiance. Enjoyed this!

John B.

09-18-2015, 04:05 PM
pretty nice work, only thing i coudl give feedback on is maybe increase the attack time on the choirs and or pads a bit so they sound les "straight out of the box"

But, i dont believe this is your first song ;)

09-19-2015, 08:37 AM
Very good. I can't believe it's the first thing you've recorded either! Obviously I'm doing something wrong...:p

09-19-2015, 12:02 PM
Thanks for the feedback! It is my first recording and I find the mixing part hard. Dont know which controlls to turn on to make the pads sound les like "straight out of the box" like Osmose said.

09-19-2015, 01:22 PM
any sort of modulation is acceptable

09-19-2015, 07:15 PM
Look for the synthesizer thats generating the sound, then increase the attack on the amp envelope

09-20-2015, 11:07 PM
Hello again! Did some changes to the song and added couple of bars with some guitar. What do guys think?


10-17-2015, 05:05 PM
Hi Tuomas, your new version sounds really good. The sound of the guitar in the third part fits very well.

10-20-2015, 07:52 PM
For the first time its pleasure to hear and you did well. My association with this piece of music is a movie with a journey or pilgrimage to a promissed land or somthing on the horizon. Again keep up and like to hear progresseions on this piece or new scenes on sound.
Ruurd form Delfzijl, Netherlands

10-23-2015, 04:02 PM
Thanks guys! :)