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Neon_Babylon
09-02-2017, 01:56 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-sh9WedPss&feature=youtu.be

RottingSerpent
09-20-2017, 03:05 AM
Awesome love the bubbly bomber man noises around 1:10

arbux
09-26-2017, 01:48 PM
First off - nice image on the YouTube video. I need to get myself a graphic designer.

I like the ideas in the track and like the tone in (I'm assuming) your vocals.

It sounds like the bass is being lost with the vocals which is a shame (around 1:00).

I did find it hard to keep track of where I was in the song as it flowed through. I would suggest changing up the chord structure to a verse / chorus (thanks to various people who have provided me that feedback in the past) to vary the song up.